I like it. It's about a good topic for our island, the message is clear, and you did a nice job with the shots and your voiceover. I do think though that you need to have some background audio in your shots. That's called nat sound remember? Hearing the ocean, the wind, and the waves helps the viewer feel like they are there. When you hear nothing, it's hard to make that connection. You could also add in a background music track as well. I think that would add to the overall feel for the PSA. Finally, your last shot has to be steady. It shakes just a little bit and when you have your titles that are steady, it makes your shaky shot stand out more. 3.7 points
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