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New Rough Cut- 3rd Draft

8/30/2016

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Mr. M
9/1/2016 01:33:04 am

Where is your paperwork for this story? I need to see the 5 points, the TIAS, and the script. It's hard to help you when I can't see any of those things. Your audio is nice and clear although the levels are off and are not even. I think you captured some great audio in your inter views but this story needs some work. I really need to see your paperwork so post them as soon as possible. One last thing, I noticed jump cuts in your interviews that need to be covered up later.

Another thing I noticed is that both parents tend to look at the camera during their interview. When someone does this, you need to stop the interview and correct them. They also appear to be looking up which means that whomever was the reporter was not at their eye level. These are things that need to be considered each time you go out for an interview.

3 points - B

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